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pen and watercolour :rose: :peace:

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:icondonnaquinn:
What an interesting way you have of painting colour. I've only just discovered your work within the past fortnight or so, and I'm really enjoying my self-guided tour through your gallery. :) The piercing expression of the leopard, reinforced by the vivid blue irises, induced me to comment here!
It's only when full-viewing that you can appreciate all the intricate textures you've packed into this piece. The swirly patterns on the rock are particularly interesting.
I feel in this case that the strength of the lighting could be increased, possibly by obliterating the pencil/ pen outline around the leopard with white paint, to help it glow more. Also, if you had made the whiskers thinner, they may have looked more convincing. Finally, perhaps some darker tones would have enhanced the depth of the inner ear area. Otherwise, it's very pretty and effective overall. The eyes look almost like cut crystal- very pretty. :D
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Beautiful picture. Nice job! :clap:

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:icondarblackwolf:
again beautiful piece

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:iconbrw-doraigaa:
so very cool! I love the detailing you have done, in both the drawing and in the coloring. I like the lovely background, so very nice. And the way you draw the ground beneith the animal is awesome and very detailed too, very cool! I like the whole drawin a lot :+fav:

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:iconfictitiouseyes:
This is lovely, awesome light!
:iconwolvenyoukai:
The only thing I see that doesn't seem quite right is the paw.
It just seems to off from the proportion

But I still REALLY like it, awesome job =D

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This is so well done.
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Brilliant piece! I love the bright color of the cat and the light background.

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Wow that is such a beautiful picture, i love the pose and the colouring alot 8)

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nice anatomy and i love the lighting, it looks so natural too!

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Apr 28, 2009, 12:35:42 AM

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